エッセイ攻略法（３）

エッセイ攻略法の３回目は、前回、日本語で書いたエッセイを英語にしてみます。

     Recently many young people have gotten into colleges or universities. In this essay, I'll discuss why a college education is not always necessary for everyone.
     First, one of the reasons for that is that it take much money to go on to colleges or universities. In fact, private universities take huge amount of money for students. National universities take less money for them than private universities. However, it still take a lot of money to go on to national universities.
     Secondly, another reason for that is that people have their own personal goals. For example, a young student whose father runs his own shops has helped his father's job since he was a child. If he follow in his father's footstep after graduating from a college, he will waste his college life. It is because colleges doesn't always useful education that is good for jobs in society.
     Furthermore, not all high school curriculums are adapted for going on to colleges or universities. In high school, there are many varieties of curriculums for going on to colleges and for getting jobs in the fields of industries and commercials. If all high school curriculums were ones for going on to colleges, the diversity would disappear.
     In conclusion, for these reasons, a college education is not always necessary for everyone. Some famous people have their experiences of higher education like a college education.

これで、２３１wordsになります。

【注意事項】
　１．各段落の最初は必ず５文字下げてから書き始める。
　　　CELではそう注意を受けているが、実際の試験では適当に文字数を下げてから書いています。（常識の範囲内なら大丈夫みたい）
　２．（鉄則）できるだけ解答用紙めーいっぱい書くこと。最後の行まで書きましょう。
　　　各段落の最後の文が行の初めの方で終わった場合、なにかをつけて行の半分を過ぎるくらい書きましょう。
　　　例えば、such as ～などで追加しましょう。

【決まった位置に決まった言葉や表現】
　１．青字で書いた部分は、だいたい決まった位置に決まった言葉や表現を用いる
　２．In this essay, I'll discuss ～の部分は、In this essay, I'll take look at ～にする場合もあります。この使い分けについては、後日、説明したいと思います。
　３．各BODYの最初の言葉は、First, Secondly, Thirdlyまたは、First, Secondly, Howeverになるときもあります。
　それは、その時のエッセイの流れに依ります。